Ed-I couldnt save them

Seriously, it feels like everything I do is a doodle or something. The coloring goes waaay to fast.

anyway, I read all the things you said and this is the result. Tryed to get a little more feeling into his face, I didn't do the lines too light and tryed to get a bit better at colouring too.

I just did the head and it looked like Edward Elric 8 D
And it's Roys hand! 8 D
(it feels like my english are at a downhill too XD)

(omg, I forgot to colour his belt, ah, never mind XD)