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Lady of the lake

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If there's anything I should change, please let me know
I want this to be as good as possible!
And I really should make the pictures look good at 100%, now it looks kinda good at 50% >_>

And I'm taking a Golf course, if you wonder why I don't upload that much XD

EDIT
thanks to ~Ryejahdin , I made some half fail reflections xD
better or worse? XD

Edit 2//
changed some stuff... don't really feel like doing it properly.
I'm supposed to be happy tomorrow, I'm not sure if I can make it...
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

I really like the generall idea and composition, especially te direct girl's view. But yo want something perfect and I'll tell you what you think you can improve.
I think you can work more with the background, the reflection on the water is great and also the vegetation, but mayb you ca add some trees inside the water trough the fogg, but not filling all the space, or also lights like glowworms, but that's just a sugestion.
I wold make that to define the fog shape.
and I think that you must diference the part of the dress that's inside the water, and the part that it's not in, with some kind of wave , or if you want to be more like a ghost , a change of texture or somethink, because the dress just desapears, and it's not understundable that the fogg is covering all the, intermidial part, just define it a little more.
I love the kimono, but maybe it wold look better with some kind of pattern, not so much, for example a simple draw on the clearer zones, and stuff....
The last thing are the eyes, I think it wold look cool if you put more colors, oranges, etc, on the iris apart of the red <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)" />

Congratulations for your work is very detailed :claps: !
And sorry for my bad English!